I would like to start off with saying that the idea is really great! the little girl in this composition really adds something to the etmosphere of the drawing
Another good point is that it 's very interesting to see 3 little fairies all together. it's very cute.
what i wondered is wether you suggested in this piece that the steampunk lady was creating the fairy she's holding? beacuse if that is the case, maybe it's nice to put some tools on the table
there's still points to work on though. one of them is the usage of light. without looking at the original stock i can tell that the little girl is originally outside in the sun, which makes the thing less realistic. also there's too much light on the pinocchio
i can see you understand that you hafe to change the lights here and there, but you should focus more on the right shading andhighlighting.
You can get far! i like the piece, keep on creating stuff like this!
good luck with your further pieces, Yours sincerely, Meankitty6
hmm looks pretty good in general but i think u forgot one thing, when coloring, other than the main highlight source(candle) there are also a secondary light source (window), if u can add a soft shade of blue coming from the direction of the window, i think it wud help alot.
I would like to start off with saying that the idea is really great!
the little girl in this composition really adds something to the etmosphere of the drawing
Another good point is that it 's very interesting to see 3 little fairies all together. it's very cute.
what i wondered is wether you suggested in this piece that the steampunk lady was creating the fairy she's holding?
beacuse if that is the case, maybe it's nice to put some tools on the table
there's still points to work on though. one of them is the usage of light. without looking at the original stock i can tell that the little girl is originally outside in the sun, which makes the thing less realistic. also there's too much light on the pinocchio
i can see you understand that you hafe to change the lights here and there, but you should focus more on the right shading andhighlighting.
You can get far!
i like the piece, keep on creating stuff like this!
good luck with your further pieces,
Yours sincerely,
Meankitty6
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